This is my recent work and one of most satisfying outcome so far. I worked on this along with few friends of mine for almost 6 months. The edit, the music, the story - all looked kinda very difficult for us to be convinced. Two months back, we got a proffesional editor to work on the footage. He did his best but we weren't very happy because the story line remained quite confusing. Finally, I decided to edit it myself on Windows Movie maker and Cyberlink power director. Here is the final version :-
This was one of most exciting project to work on. First of all, I liked the concept and I decided to shot in full HD. I went to Bangalore to meet a friend and we decided to finish the shoot in a day as I had to come back the next day. We did some hardwork and finished shooting and were quite happy, until we saw them later and realized that the storyline is too confusing to anyone but us.
Original Storyline :
Story of a man who ,like most of us - lives in future, has dreams and wishes and doesn't expect to die anytime too soon. However , one day he just dies while the life moves on.
Specifications :
Canon 600D , Canon 50mm prime lens, Canon 18-135 mm zoom lens, Full HD (1080p)
My learnings from the project :
1.) Better plan your shot : We did the shoot in one day, almost adhoc with no planning. Later, I so wished that I could go back in time and reshoot few more shots and it'll make the movie much better. I had no choice but to use the footage I had. Better planning would have really created a better movie and much less work in editing and post production.
2.) Avoid silly mistakes : Be Meticulous
There are some really silly mistakes in the movie like the ciggrate during the first shot is of different company while the ciggrate during the second shot is of a different company. (Infact, in a retrospect - I think the entire ciggrate scene was unwanted, why should we promote smoking when the story line can do without it.) In the other shot (time lapse) shadows of me and my friends kept changing the lighting arrangement in the frame. Such mistakes might be noted only by keen observers, but nevertheless it makes the work more amateur.
3.) Shoot close ups : Strength of DSLRs
DSLRs spill magic when we shoot them in close shots. They are aren't best camera if you want to have wide angle view (unless you've an expensive wide angle lens). Depth of Field is quite fantastic and the composition comes out pretty good if we shoot not from too far. You can see that we used lot of close up shots in the movie, it came out better than all the long / wide shots I've done before. Basically, shoot only for what you've got right lenses.
4.) Better story telling :
I think any movie with good story line is worth watching. The story line in this movie doesn't come out so well. I think this is a movie that needs certain explanation to the audience to really communicate what I wanted to show. A good movie will be self explanatory. I need to learn this one.
5.) Editing can do wonders :
After watching some 4-5 different versions of same footage, I realized the power of editing. Editing can completely ruin or improve the footage and story telling. I think editing is as important to shooting itself. I learnt a lot about non-linear editing, using flashbacks and various symbols to communicate the message in this short film. However, this is perhaps my first real editing project. I need to grow a lot here.
Thanks for reading all the way. Wish you all the best. Please share your feedbacks to help me improve.
This was one of most exciting project to work on. First of all, I liked the concept and I decided to shot in full HD. I went to Bangalore to meet a friend and we decided to finish the shoot in a day as I had to come back the next day. We did some hardwork and finished shooting and were quite happy, until we saw them later and realized that the storyline is too confusing to anyone but us.
Original Storyline :
Story of a man who ,like most of us - lives in future, has dreams and wishes and doesn't expect to die anytime too soon. However , one day he just dies while the life moves on.
Specifications :
Canon 600D , Canon 50mm prime lens, Canon 18-135 mm zoom lens, Full HD (1080p)
My learnings from the project :
1.) Better plan your shot : We did the shoot in one day, almost adhoc with no planning. Later, I so wished that I could go back in time and reshoot few more shots and it'll make the movie much better. I had no choice but to use the footage I had. Better planning would have really created a better movie and much less work in editing and post production.
2.) Avoid silly mistakes : Be Meticulous
There are some really silly mistakes in the movie like the ciggrate during the first shot is of different company while the ciggrate during the second shot is of a different company. (Infact, in a retrospect - I think the entire ciggrate scene was unwanted, why should we promote smoking when the story line can do without it.) In the other shot (time lapse) shadows of me and my friends kept changing the lighting arrangement in the frame. Such mistakes might be noted only by keen observers, but nevertheless it makes the work more amateur.
3.) Shoot close ups : Strength of DSLRs
DSLRs spill magic when we shoot them in close shots. They are aren't best camera if you want to have wide angle view (unless you've an expensive wide angle lens). Depth of Field is quite fantastic and the composition comes out pretty good if we shoot not from too far. You can see that we used lot of close up shots in the movie, it came out better than all the long / wide shots I've done before. Basically, shoot only for what you've got right lenses.
4.) Better story telling :
I think any movie with good story line is worth watching. The story line in this movie doesn't come out so well. I think this is a movie that needs certain explanation to the audience to really communicate what I wanted to show. A good movie will be self explanatory. I need to learn this one.
5.) Editing can do wonders :
After watching some 4-5 different versions of same footage, I realized the power of editing. Editing can completely ruin or improve the footage and story telling. I think editing is as important to shooting itself. I learnt a lot about non-linear editing, using flashbacks and various symbols to communicate the message in this short film. However, this is perhaps my first real editing project. I need to grow a lot here.
Thanks for reading all the way. Wish you all the best. Please share your feedbacks to help me improve.